After taking the decision to redesign the principle character, it’s taken me a while to get this page finished, as I’d already drawn it using the original version of Psion. This page also features a revised version of her main protagonist; I thought his design was a bit weak too, so I’ve made him look a bit more useful. I’ve based his face on one of my favourite actors, but it’s only a passing likeness.
I’m glad I decided to redesign Psion; I feel a lot more positive about this page now that I’ve updated her outfit. The only issue I have is with the sword strike in panel 4; I think I need to revisit this to add a bit more movement to the pose. She doesn’t look like she’s used much effort to make such a devastating cut.